
Dr. Mr. Selznick,
I
wanted to explain to you why I found your book so interesting. First of all I want you to know that this was
an assignment from my children’s literature class, and I was not thrilled about
reading your novel, to be honest. This
is why I would further like you to know that I thoroughly enjoyed how you opened
your story, making me unable to put the book down even in the middle of a Super
Bowl Sunday. In the first chapter, The Thief, the main element you used was
your pictures. There were little words
within this chapter. I think by doing
this you are grabbing your reader’s attention so well. I must admit that I tried with all my might
to look at each one of those first pictures slowly, like you said to do in your
brief introduction, yet I found myself flipping page to page quicker as the
pages went on. Your illustrations are so
beautiful but I didn’t stop to enjoy them as I should have. I wanted so badly to see what was going to
happen next.
I like how you had
little text within the first chapter. It
really makes the reader want to know more, like what is Hugo doing inside the walls of a train station?, what one earth
are those drawings?, why is the old man so upset?, why is that notebook that is
full of sketches so important to Hugo and the old man? You wrote ‘“Ghosts…” the old man muttered to
himself. “I knew they would find me here
eventually.” He closed the
notebook. The expression on his face
changed from fear to sadness to anger. “Who
are you boy? Did you draw these
pictures?”’ (pg. 60) That passage sucked
me into your novel. You left so much to
the reader’s imagination within this chapter that I couldn’t wait to find out
more about this mystery. What did the old man fear? What made the old man so sad? Why did the old man get so angry with Hugo
over some drawings?!
The drawings on
pages 52-59 also leaves the reader to wonder what this novel will turn into. I really paid attention to the drawings on
page 52-53. I liked how the sketch book
was just that, a sketch book. In the
lower left hand corner of Hugo’s notebook was a hand holding an old fashioned
pen. I didn't think much of that sketch,
or the sketch of the back of this ‘man’ on page 55 where it appears to be an upside
down heart in his back, yet as I read on and got deeper into the novel I kept flipping
back to these pages and the gears in my mind wouldn't stop trying to figure out
the next scene to unfold. I do have to say, the upside down heart shaped key on Isabelle's necklace (pg. 221) was an exciting moment because I knew what that key would fit into right then!
I think it’s
important for you to know that this book was very well written. As I stated earlier, I thoroughly enjoyed
it. I want you to know, as well, that I
do not plan on selling the book back to my school, I plan on keeping it for my
family and friends to read so that they can find the same enjoyment I did.
Thank you very much for your
entertaining work, it was much appreciated,
Molly Sturgis
Hi Molly,
ReplyDeleteI liked your letter to Mr. Selznick. I especially liked the fact that you asked all the right questions that left me wondering. Thanks for your post it was really fun reading it.